Saturday, May 7, 2011

He whispered.......

I am ridden I said
With guilt don't be he said
But it is life I said
Only a mass of tissue he said
How will I go on I said
There is no condemnation he said
But you're only a physician I said
And so I should know he said
Go on, take care of yourself he waved
Oh my soul I cannot live I said
Be still, I have not left, He whispered....

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Perhaps I should explain the copyright logo on this one. I'm considering using this as one of those passages you find before chapter 1, I'm not sure what the correct term for it is. If you know it please advise, and then tell me what you think?

That's what it said, who am I to argue. hahaha
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2 comments:

  1. Hi Wendy! I absolutely love this! I'm going to write it in my journal. I keep a journal of "me" for my kids to cherish one day! I fill it with thoughts, wishes, and wisdom I want them to know!

    Hope you are having a great week!

    Kortney

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  2. Oh Kortney that is most wonderful of you thank you. I appreciate that my thoughts make it into such a personal space in your life. Very highly honored.Hugs

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